I can think of several ways I would immediately modify this. Look at this entire corner. Redundancies on redundancies -- when you should be devoting all that time and energy to pulling the stress from here.
[ each point at a specific spot is more like an air-stab. ]
And I see what THIS going for, but... you're putting too much strain on ALL the odd degrees of that circle.
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[ each point at a specific spot is more like an air-stab. ]
And I see what THIS going for, but... you're putting too much strain on ALL the odd degrees of that circle.